Re: culture scene

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Date: Thu Jun 14 2001 - 18:10:56 CEST

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Jeremy:

knowledgeable in --> knowledgeable of
aggrevate --> aggravate
exclusive to a certain interest --> this makes little sense
its --> it's (contraction of it is)
whats up --> what's up (contraction of what is)

I would avoid offensive and sexist constructions such as:
"As well, there are no f*cking girls, at least my age, who know whats up."

I would also avoid completely vague and informationless terms such as:
"culture scene"

Good luck at University.

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